Add PhantomToy StoryQuest #2502
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…name-template Duplicar y renombrar template y tosdos los archivos
…arrativa Narrativa e introduccion del juego
Agregar narrativa para el minijuego 3 de Phantom Toy
…/corruption-defense Feature/corruption defense
…name-template Copy rename template
…acion2 arreglar mini2
…minijuego2 musica y frames del bicho
…name-template Agregar minjuego-2
…mini1 Ultimo mini1
implement quest description
arreglar problemas de pantalla cortada
…usicamini3 anadir musica
…minjuego2-licencia Musica minjuego2 licencia
…musicamini1 ULTIMO CAMBIO DE MUSICA-MINIJUEGO1
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Play this branch at https://play.threadbare.game/branches/Game-Lab-6-0-UTP-Grupo-6-Equipo-5/main/. (This launches the game from the start, not directly at the change(s) in this pull request.) |
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I was able to play through your StoryQuest and really enjoyed the story, the creepy/shadowy themes and the conclusion about living with those negative emotions!
I added a few comments, some more general things are every script file with original code should contain licensing information labeling it as such. For example:
# SPDX-FileCopyrightText: The Threadbare Authors
# SPDX-License-Identifier: MPL-2.0
could be the first two lines of the file.
There are a few sections seem unused, if this StoryQuest is indeed done (which it seems very close to being!). The Sequence puzzle directory + scenes seem like they can be deleted.
There are also some assets that have both a left and right facing copy. That is something that can be set within the editor using the same image.
The res://scenes/quests/story_quests/phantom_toy/1_stealth/mini1/musica/610140__hellodarknesswhycomeits4pm__creepy-horror-ambience.wav file is pretty big! It is possible to convert this to an .ogg file reducing the file size. This is something I could also replace (assuming I figure out how to push directly to your fork).
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This file does not seem to be used and can be deleted
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This variable is never used and can be removed
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In playing this level, I was able to press the sprint key twice and continuously run without the cooldown. I think it is because, despite _process checking if sprint is available, it does not actually block additional attempts to press "running".
_process runs every frame, so when the "running" input is pressed a second time, it does not enter the conditional on line 12 and never gets released (allowing the player to sprint without cooldown).
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This should just be swapped with sprint_manager.gd which handles this problem well!
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This logic could also exist within the esc_1.gd script rather than attaching it to a separate Node2D
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Super creepy being chased by the shadow creature! I really like this scene. I will say there are a few minor z-index things such as some of the items on the DECO TileMapLayer where the player can walk through/under them.
I like the random spawning of each fragment, I think it gives the level a nice amount of challenge!
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Someone also mentioned this on the Endless platform feed, but it might make it a bit easier to expand the view (light) of the player so it is easier to find the fragments.
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I believe this is not used and can be deleted.
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A few of these tilesets don't seem to be used by any of these scenes and can be deleted.
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Super cool quest everyone! This was very fun to play through and slightly creepy with the shadow... I enjoyed it a lot.
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This maze is super tricky in the dark! It is a bit of a challenge to find the thread, but possible after lots of wandering around.
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Since the rock is further down in the scene tree, the player ends up going underneath it when walking across. It might make more sense to reorder that or change the z-index so the player passes in front.
Also, an idea but not necessarily a suggestion: the rock could be modulated to fit the darker vibe when the scene changes.
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PhantomToy narra la historia de un niño que explora una feria abandonada y descubre un antiguo peluche habitado por un espíritu fragmentado. Juntos, deben atravesar atracciones oscuras, evitar a una entidad misteriosa conocida como "La Sombra" y recolectar fragmentos de alma para romper la maldición. El juego incluye tres etapas principales: el centro de la feria, un laberinto de espejos con mecánicas de sigilo y un desafío de defensa de altares en el bosque. Combina estilo pixel art, iluminación tensa y temas narrativos psicológicos.
Assets:
arbol_creepy.png por @sam0xs
barril-1.png por @sam0xs
barril.png por @sam0xs
cabina_simple-1.png por @sam0xs
cabina_simple.png por @sam0xs
cabina_ticket-1.png por @sam0xs
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calavera_payaso.png por @sam0xs
calavera_sombrero_payaso.png por @sam0xs
caseta_verde-1.png por @sam0xs
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circo.png por @sam0xs
cruz2.png por @sam0xs
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east.png por @sam0xs
faro-1.png por @sam0xs
faro.png por @sam0xs
foca.pngpor @sam0xs
globos-1.png por @sam0xs
globos.png por @sam0xs
juego_caballos.png por @sam0xs
madera.png por @sam0xs
marmol2.png por @sam0xs
marmol.png por @sam0xs
mediotronco_creepy.png por @sam0xs
north.png por @sam0xs
south.png por @sam0xs
taburete_rojo.png por @sam0xs
taburete_verde.png por @sam0xs
troncotalado_creepy.png por @sam0xs
tronco_creepy.png por @sam0xs
tumba2.png por @sam0xs
tumba3.png por @sam0xs
tumba4.png por @sam0xs
tumba.png por @sam0xs
west.png por @sam0xs
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Musica-Laberinto.wav - CC0 - https://freesound.org/people/Marvin_Chiriguaya/sounds/741336/
Creepy Horror Ambience.wav - CC0 - https://freesound.org/people/hellodarknesswhycomeits4pm/sounds/610140/
Four_Voices_Whispering_2.wav - Attribution - https://freesound.org/people/geoneo0/sounds/193811/
beeep.mp3 - CC0 - https://freesound.org/people/Entershift/sounds/704134/
purificacion.wav - CC0 - https://freesound.org/people/Seth_Makes_Sounds/sounds/587894/
shadow_movement.mp3 - CC0 - https://freesound.org/people/Darsycho/sounds/505185/
susurro_corrupcion.wav - Attribution - https://freesound.org/people/geoneo0/sounds/193811/
trueno.mp3 - CC0 - https://freesound.org/people/DaniloSFX/sounds/672776/
Engineering:
Intro por @Luccio2005
minijuego1 busqueda por @FaDc17
minijuego2 laberinto por @fabriciocrispin12-commits
minijuego3 corrupcion por @Rafiqui12345
Outro por @Luccio2005
Arte por @sam0xs
musica por @FaDc17
Efectos de sondio por @FaDc17
Game Design:
Jugabilidad principal y mecánica por @Rafiqui12345, @FaDc17, @fabriciocrispin12-commits
Narrativa y diálogos de @Luccio2005, @Rafiqui12345, @FaDc17, @fabriciocrispin12-commits
Diseño visual y dirección de arte por @sam0xs
Progresión y motivación por @Rafiqui12345, @FaDc17, @fabriciocrispin12-commits, @Luccio2005, @sam0xs